The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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This
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summary is aimed to make a comparison of the different types of energy
consumption
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by fuel in the U.S. The starting year is 1980 and predictions are going to be made up to 2030. There are 5 different options for the
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of energy
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seen in the U.S. at the current state,
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Nuclear solar, wind hydropower, natural gas, petrol and oil, and coal. The data that can be obtained from the graph leads to the point that finite resources are the most energy-requiring ones. It can be seen that petrol and oil starting is
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at the level of the 35
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of
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and going to increase up to the 45
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of
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. The same is going to happen with finite resources coal is going to increase by 15
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from 15 to 30 and natural has from 20 to 25
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, nuclear/ wing hydropower is going to decrease their
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it's planned by starting from 4
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united and fluctuating from 2 and up to 6
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. In conclusion, nuclear/ wing hydropower seemed to be more effective as it consumes less energy and it is renewable so it is possible forever
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, quadrillions, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • trends
  • marked increase
  • dominant source
  • modest increase
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • nuclear energy
  • noticeable decline
  • span
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
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