The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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summary is aimed to make a comparison of the different types of energy Linking Words
consumption
by fuel in the U.S. The starting year is 1980 and predictions are going to be made up to 2030. There are 5 different options for the Use synonyms
consumption
of energy Use synonyms
that is
seen in the U.S. at the current state, Linking Words
such
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as
Nuclear solar, wind hydropower, natural gas, petrol and oil, and coal.
The data that can be obtained from the graph leads to the point that finite resources are the most energy-requiring ones. It can be seen that petrol and oil starting is Change preposition
apply
consumption
at the level of the 35 Use synonyms
quadrillions
of Use synonyms
units
and going to increase up to the 45 Use synonyms
quadrillions
of Use synonyms
units
. The same is going to happen with finite resources coal is going to increase by 15 Use synonyms
quadrillions
Use synonyms
units
from 15 to 30 and natural has from 20 to 25 Use synonyms
quadrillions
Use synonyms
units
.
Use synonyms
However
, nuclear/ wing hydropower is going to decrease their Linking Words
consumption
it's planned by starting from 4 Use synonyms
quadrillions
united and fluctuating from 2 and up to 6 Use synonyms
quadrillions
Use synonyms
units
.
In conclusion, nuclear/ wing hydropower seemed to be more effective as it consumes less energy and it is renewable so it is possible foreverUse synonyms
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