The line graph gives data on the proportion of children respects to the total young population in the UK between 1990 and 2001. The proportion of children are categories in four age groups.
The chart illustrates the proportion of people other than adults and elderly in the UK.
According to
the data, from 1990 to 2001, there were significant changes in the number of young folks aged 0 to 19. Among them, babies aged 0 to 4 was the largest at
1992, up to 26.5% and teenager aged 15 to 19 had the least Change preposition
in
at
1994, down to 23%. Change preposition
in
Till from
1993 to 1997, the trends of the population changes became similar and went to Change preposition
From
a
average percentage.
It can Change the article
an
Change the verb form
be noticed
noticed
that the aged 15 to 19 in 1990 amounted to a peak, Change the form of the verb
notice
whereas
the percentage of
increased quickly after that. Change preposition
apply
Similarly
, in 1995, there was a high point between the ages of 0 to 4, reached
26%. Wrong verb form
reaching
Then
, the percentage dropped gradually by 2001. On the contrary
, 10 to 14 years old citizens saw the
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a
reduce
during Replace the word
reduction
this
period in 1990. Similarly
, the proportion of 0
to 9 years old population Correct article usage
the 0
were
relatively lower Change the verb form
was
initially
, which were 25.9% and 24.6% respectively.Submitted by cyh000823 on
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