some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world, subject like science and technology are more important than History

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Some
people
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say that among all the school
subjects
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history
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is one of
major
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subjects
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in schools.
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, some
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say that the
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that are related to
science
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and
technology
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are more dominant than
history
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.
History
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is past, and
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the past
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is related to the things that have been done. So
history
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teaches us from
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past mistakes. So,
history
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teaches us from the past mistakes that have been done in any field and we can learn from them.
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,
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and
technology
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made our lives easy by all means. In the past
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have to travel for
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to reach their destination, but
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and
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makes
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it far easy by
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,trains,buses,cars and bikes. The travel that can take weeks in the past is now taking some hours.
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is a subject
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able to consistently reminds us about the struggle of our ancestors. The struggle for independence. The struggles for keeping the countries safe.
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, some
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are very fond of reading
history
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books
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and learning about their culture and customs.
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and
technology
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are the
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that
keeps
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us connected to the modern world. Children can learn
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and by the influence of
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they can make their
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in
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and
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also
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us to compete with the modern world by observing
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inventions and experiments. In conclusion, my opinion is that it is complex to prioritise one of these
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over the other. I think that both of these
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had their importance in our lives. We just can't ignore one of these
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beacon of the other.
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made our lives easy by using
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modern
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and
history
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is a subject that keeps us connected to our past.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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