The charts below show the percentages of male and female students getting top grades in 1960 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts provide information on how much percentage of grades Male and Female students obtained in different
subjects
in two time periods (1960 and 2000). Overall
, Men
were excellent in Science
and Maths
subjects
compared to Women in both years whereas
, females were better in Arts and Language subjects
than Men
.
In the year 1960, Men
dominated the Science
and Maths
subjects
with approximately around 32% and 30% respectively while
Women were relatively less than 11% in both subjects
. However
, Females turned out to be better in Arts, Languages and Humanities subjects
which were considerably higher than 30% and the highest of all was around 45% which no Males ever got in their academics. Furthermore
, since 2000 the statistics have dropped for Men
in Science
and Maths
subjects
while
the Humanities subject was outperformed by males by touching the peak of more than 40% compared to Women.
In addition
, Female performance shrank in almost all the subjects
in the year 2000 only in Science
subject it grew by 1% and in Maths
subject it was at the same percentage.Submitted by Melroy on
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