The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The line graph illustrates the number of goods delivered in the UK during the period 1974 to 2002.
It is clear that
Linking Words
the road was the most important mode of transport in general.In these four transportations,almost every mode of transport in the UK had an upward trend,
besides
Linking Words
rail
Use synonyms
which was delined in these years. In the year 1974,the highest amount of goods transported was by road,with around 70
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
Use synonyms
,and the amount of pipeline was the lowest just 5
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
Use synonyms
.In the same year,the transportation of water and
rail
Use synonyms
had a similar figure which was 40
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
Use synonyms
.Over the following four years water and
rail
Use synonyms
reached the same figure about 40
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
Use synonyms
. Between 1978 and 1990,there was a sharp increase in the transportation of water and pipeline
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
and a dramatic decrease in
rail
Use synonyms
and road.
Then
Linking Words
there was a short growth in 10 years.
Finally
Linking Words
,in 2002,the four goods transportation reached the highest figure respectively,with 95,65,41 and 21
million
Use synonyms
tonnes
Use synonyms
.
Submitted by 2975842009 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rail, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Overview
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Mode of transport
  • Quantity
  • Comparison
  • Goods
  • Transported
  • Significant
  • Noticeable
  • General trend
  • Time span
What to do next:
Look at other essays: