Mrs. Brett, an english speaking women whonlives in your town, has advertise for someone to help her at home for a few hours a day next summer. In your letter: 1. Suggest how youy could help her in her house. 2. say why you would like to do this work. 3. explain when you will and will not be available.

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Mrs. Brett, My name is Amanpreet
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letter to bring
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your kind consideration that I would be thrilled to help you out during
summer
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the summer

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apply

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I live in
same
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the same

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town as you, it would be
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a few

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minutes'

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drive to your house. I can help you with the
settelment
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settlement

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of your house. Because, I have done an interior
desinging
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designing
design

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course and I have
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helped my
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uncle few

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times, who is a
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professional

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designer. I can help you with moving stuff, choosing wall
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colours

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, lights and selecting furniture. I would be happy to join you because I need more
hands on
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hands-on

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experience to open my own
buisness
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business

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. I would be available on weekends and
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only because of my summer school. If you are interested please contact me through my phone number (365)7738553. Hoping for your kind revert from you. Your's
sincerely
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sincere

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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