Mrs. Brett, an english speaking women whonlives in your town, has advertise for someone to help her at home for a few hours a day next summer. In your letter: 1. Suggest how youy could help her in her house. 2. say why you would like to do this work. 3. explain when you will and will not be available.

Mrs. Brett, My name is Amanpreet
kaur
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, I am inscribing
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this
letter to bring
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your kind consideration that I would be thrilled to help you out during
summer
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. Since
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I live in
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town as you, it would be
few
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minutes
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drive to your house. I can help you with the
settelment
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settlement
of your house. Because, I have done an interior
desinging
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designing
design
course and I have
also
helped my
aunclefew
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uncle few
times, who is a
proffessional
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professional
designer. I can help you with moving stuff, choosing wall
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, lights and selecting furniture. I would be happy to join you because I need more
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experience to open my own
buisness
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business
. I would be available on weekends and
evening
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only because of my summer school. If you are interested please contact me through my phone number (365)7738553. Hoping for your kind revert from you. Your's
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, Amanpreet Kaur
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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