Mrs. Brett, an english speaking women whonlives in your town, has advertise for someone to help her at home for a few hours a day next summer. In your letter: 1. Suggest how youy could help her in her house. 2. say why you would like to do this work. 3. explain when you will and will not be available.

#mrs #brett #english #women #whonlives #town #someone #home #hours #summer #youy #house #work

Mrs. Brett, My name is Amanpreet

kaur

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, I am inscribing

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your kind consideration that I would be thrilled to help you out during

summer

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the summer

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town as you, it would be

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drive to your house. I can help you with the

settelment

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of your house. Because, I have done an interior

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designing

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course and I have

also

helped my

aunclefew

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uncle few

times, who is a

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professional

designer. I can help you with moving stuff, choosing wall

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, lights and selecting furniture. I would be happy to join you because I need more

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experience to open my own

buisness

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business

. I would be available on weekends and

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only because of my summer school. If you are interested please contact me through my phone number (365)7738553. Hoping for your kind revert from you. Your's

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, Amanpreet Kaur

Submitted by kaurubaman07 on Wed Jul 19 2023

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

148 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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