The provided graph represents women unemployment in the UK, especially in four of its countries. Now, turning to the details, the comparison is only between 2013 and 2014.

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women

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unemployment in the UK, especially in four of its countries. Now, turning to the details, the comparison is only between 2013 and 2014. As

it

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can be seen from the data , every other country ended up

by

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decreased

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the decreased

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amount of jobless

female

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females

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,

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Scotland, it had a rise

up

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to 6.7

percent

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per cent

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. It is worth noticing that Wales and Northern Ireland had the

most low

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figures compared with the other two.

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the outcome of twenty fourteen was eventually less

as

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in twenty

thirdteen

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thirteen

. The

more

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employed from all four countries was

the

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Ireland , with the results a little more than 4.5%

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England and Scotland

shows

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considerably high percentages at the beginning and a little less or even

dramatically

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growth of female

unemployement

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unemployment

at the end

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. It is obvious that two of them made a good decrease,

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however

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the other two were

steadliness

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steadiness

or worse.