The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of two genders in a specific nation in Asia who achieved a driver's licence from 1980 to 2010.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the percentage of women who passed their driving test was larger than those of men throughout the period.
Also
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, it is noticeable that both rates of females and males increased in the first 20 years. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the ratio of women who got through the driving test rose slightly by approximately 4% from 1980 to 1990,
then
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it peaked at about 68 per cent in 2000, before dropping to roughly 63% in the final year.
In contrast
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, the proportion of men who passed the exam was around 28% in the initial year, which was almost half of those females. It ascended moderately until 2000, reaching a rate of just below 50%, and
this
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remained constant in 2010.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Pass rate
  • Driving test
  • Trend
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Milestone
  • Comparison
  • Significant difference
  • Broad social changes
  • Policy changes
  • Surpass
  • Reflect
  • Implications
  • Disparity
  • Overall trends
  • Summarize
  • Statistical data
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