The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.
The quantity of fruit grown in
France
, Germany, Spain, and Turkey
over 30 years (1970-2010) is presented in the diagram below. Overall
, Spain and Germany’s production decreased, while
a rise was witnessed in France
and Turkey
.
To begin
with, France
and Turkey
produced above one and two million tonnes
, respectively. From there, the Asian-country’s
production grew in an almost linear fashion, ultimately reaching approximately 3.5 million Correct your spelling
Asian country’s
tonnes
per year, at the end
of the period. On the other hand
, France
struggled along the way, going through fluctuations, peaking at just below 3,000,000 tonnes
by 2010.
Conversely
, Spain was initially
at an extraordinary 5,500,000 tonnes
. In addition
to that, it reached it’s
peak in 1980, reaching about 6,000,000. Replace the word
its
However
, the amount gradually decreased, ending up at slightly above 5,000,000, which is still mind-boggling. Germany’s fruit growth declined at a steady rate, dropping from 2,500,000 to around 1,200,000 tonnes
, over the entire range.
All in all, the most significant jump in figures belongs to Turkey
, while
the unfortunate loss in fruit was in Germany.Submitted by leensarar on
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