The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992. Employees and self-employed: by sex and occupation, 1992
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
males
and females
working manual and non-manual in the United Kingdom in the year 1992.
Overall
, it is clear that
there was a higher percentage of women in non-manual work, while
manual work is more popular among men in British.
Look at the detail, nearly a quarter of males
chosen
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chose
whereas
there are few women enjoying this
work, just only 3%. In addition
, there was least in the figure for both sexes which stood at 2% and 1% for males
and females
respectively. The
Other manual, Change preposition
In the
males
and females
had a relatively similar more than a fourth in both genders.
Clerical or related were chosen by the most females
, with approximately 31%; in contrast
, just already 6% of males
joined this
occupation. The largest data of males
and females
was Managerial and professional, standing at 36% and 29% respectively. Finally
, the Other manual’s statistics were relatively the same which was more than a fourth in both genders.Submitted by anhnguhongmai on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females with synonyms.
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