The two pie charts give information on the propotion of males and females in employment in six general categories in 1992, they divided into manual and non-manual. Manual occupation includes Craft or similar, General labourers and other manua
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The
two
pie charts give information on the Use synonyms
propotion
of males and females in Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
employment
in six general categories in 1992, they divided into manual and non-manual. Manual occupation includes Craft or similar, General labourers and other manual. Use synonyms
While
non-manual Linking Words
occupation
are Managerial and professional, Clerical or related and other non-manual. Fix the agreement mistake
occupations
Overall
, it can be noticed that women prefer non-manual work, Linking Words
whereas
men choose manual Linking Words
Use synonyms
labor
more.
In the first diorama, it is clearly seen that non-manual Change the spelling
labour
employment
exceeds manual Use synonyms
employment
. Use synonyms
For example
, Clerical or related Linking Words
maked
up the highest Correct your spelling
made
percentage
, i.e. 31%, followed by 29% Use synonyms
was
from Managerial and professional, and the lowest one was Other non-manual with nine Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
,respectively. In general, non-manual work in the female chart is 69%, which is more than doubled by manual one. More specifically, manual Use synonyms
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labor
in women's Change the spelling
labour
graphic
as a whole was 31%, twenty-seven Fix the agreement mistake
graphics
Use synonyms
percent
of which is Other manual Change the spelling
per cent
Use synonyms
labor
, 3% was Craft or similar, and only Change the spelling
labour
one
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apply
Use synonyms
percent
was General labourers.
In the second graph, there is not as big a difference between Change the spelling
per cent
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two
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the two
tpes
of Correct your spelling
types
employment
as in the first. To be more precise, manual Use synonyms
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labor
accounted for 52%, in the manual Change the spelling
labour
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labor
part other manual had the largest Change the spelling
labour
percentage
, 26%. Followed by Craft or similar with 24%. And the smallest Use synonyms
percentage
was general Use synonyms
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labor
, only Change the spelling
labour
two
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percent
, respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
While
Managerial and professional accounted for the highest Linking Words
percentage
with 36%, and Use synonyms
other
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the other
two
had 6% each.Use synonyms
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