The chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom in one year. Summaries the the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the different types of goods and services purchased online in Australia, Canada and the United Kingdom in one year. Summaries the the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of top internet purchase categories by Australia, Canada, and the United Kingdom(UK) in an annual.
Overall
, the major contributor was the UK which had made an expenditure on music and books.
Likewise
, the citizens of Australia and Canada brought nearly the same proportion of computer equipment and books. Regarding the purchase of financial, services the inhabitants of the UK accounted for roughly 1% which was the least expense made during the year.
Whereas
approximately sixty-one proportion of transaction was made in music and books becoming the highest expenditure recorded so far. Percentage-wise, Canadian shoppers invested nearly the same amount on computer accessories and study materials which were around forty-three per cent.
Similarly
, the fewer bill payment recorded by Canadian individuals was on food and drink items(about 1%). Meanwhile, the Australian made transactions in toys for only one-tenth of the Canadian ones.
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