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The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two seperate years.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two seperate years.
#show #information #energy #production #country #two #seperate #years
The given pie charts
details
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 information about the variety of
energy
 sources
distribution
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 in a particular country in 2005 and 2005 across 5 different sectors: coal,
gas
,
petro
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petrol
, nuclear and other production.
Overall
, it is readily apparent that coal and
gas
 in both years remained the largest source of
energy
 supply. Whilst
gas
, coal, nuclear and other categories shared the same upward trend, an opposite pattern was observed in petro.
To begin
, it is noticeable that most of
energy
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 manufacturing came from
gas
 and coal, which were roughly equal with each
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 for above a quarter of all five sectors. By 2005, coal and
gas
 both witnessed
minimal
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 rise at 30.93% and 30.31%, respectively. It is worth noticing that petrol was
the
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third-ranked
in
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one of the most vital
energy
 sources in 1995,
however
, it sharply plunged to 19.55% in 2005.
In contrast
, producing
energy
 from
other
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others
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 was the least
favored
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 form of manufacturing
while
 there was
a
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substantial growth, but still made up a minor percentage of all five categories. With regards to
nuclear
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the nuclear
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 section, in 1995, it constituted only 6.40%, withal, increased to 10.10% after 10 years.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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