The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graphs depict the
life
cycle
of silkworms and show the silk cloth production from silkworms. As is presented in the first graph, there are 4 stages of the
life
cycle
of a silkworm from eggs to cocoon and the silk production is done in 6 steps.
According to
the first diagram, adult silkworms lay eggs in Mulberry leaves and the eggs take 10 days to produce silkworm
larva
Fix the agreement mistake
larvae
show examples
. The larvae eat the leaf and take another 4 to 6 weeks to wrap them with silk threat shells to complete their third stage of the
life
cycle
. In the fourth stage of their
life
cycle
, they are converted into cocoons and they remain like
this
for about 16 days to become grown moths. The moths
then
become adults and re-initiate the
cycle
. The second graph depicts the steps required to produce silks from the cocoons. In the initial stage, the fine cocoons are selected. They are
then
boiled in water and unwinded to produce around 300 to 900 m long thread. The produced threads are
then
twisted and dyed. The weaving is the
last
step that requires dyeing as well. After that, the silks are produced and could be used.
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