The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The line chart displays the consumption of food, housing, transportation, health care and clothing for four countries in 2009.
Overall
, housing showed the highest and healthcare the lowest rate among five
different categories.
The expenditures of Correct article usage
the five
US
, Canada, UK, Correct article usage
the US
Japan
on category housing were the largest. There is a 2 to 10 times difference between Correct word choice
and Japan
housing
and health care category.
For Correct article usage
the housing
food
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the food
section
the highest percentage was 23 which is Japan’s consumption. The least share belonged to the US. Add a comma
,section
Clothing
and health care part illustrated the smallest activity among categories. The most Correct article usage
The clothing
expands
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on
category Change preposition
apply
housing
is Change preposition
of housing
the
US, transportation - Change preposition
in the
Canada
and food - Change preposition
in Canada
Japan
.Change preposition
in Japan
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