The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the projected population growth of China and India.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates information about the rise of inhabitants by
India
and
China
in billions in the year between 2000 and 2050.
Overall
,
China
had the highest number of population than that of
India
. Both countries maintained to surge throughout the period.
However
,
India
will outrace
China
at the end
of the period. In 2000, the number of residents in
China
was above 1200 billion.
Then
, it rose steadily and could hit a high point of about 1.4.5 billion in the year 2030.
This
year there will be an intersection between
India
and
China
. After 3 decades (2030) the figure will have a slight drop and reach 1400 million at the finish of the period (2050).
India
's citizen was one hundred million in 2000, and it gradually rose and maintained the same population as
China
in 2015. Both countries are going to have an equal number of the community after thirty years which is expected to be roughly between 1.5 and 1.4 billion.
Consequently
, a continuous upward trend will take or lead
India
to touch 1600 million population after a century(2050).
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  • projected population growth
  • line graph
  • milestones
  • projections
  • plateau
  • decline
  • rate of growth
  • peak
  • surpass
  • crossover
  • period
  • trend analysis
  • comparative analysis
  • significantly
  • eventually
  • illustrates
  • specific period
  • trends
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