You were recently disrespected by one of the employees at your local supermarket. Write a letter to the supermarket manager. In your letter • tell why you were speaking with the employee • describe the employee's rude behavior • explain what you'd like the manager to do

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Hi, dear manager Well, Introducing myself, My full name is Jumayeva Sarvinoz. Writing about the process, i am in shock, cause, i have never seen before like the terrible situation. Two days ago, With the intention of purchasing bargain,
that is
, I fought with Salmon employee. I uttered him before: "if
this
washing- machine does not work well, i will go back,
instead
of these i wil get another. He agreed to the opinion, but, yesterday, after coming him, he said to me not to exchange
this
product, Because, i broke
this
item. It is not good to cheat clients, he will not admit that, he passed on the product which is used by someone. Depicting his the worst behavior is, speaking with the loud noise. He is no the right to speak high. In short, dear manager, please i will ask you being polite of the employee or exchange another one. I did not broke the washing-machine. Please, give to be not drawbacks of the equipment me. I hope, you will look through my position, and tell a fair decision us. I am looking forward to expect your best option. Thank you beforehand. Sincerely, One othe your client: Sarvinoz
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greeting and closing
Address the manager with a more formal greeting, such as 'Dear Sir/Madam' or 'To the Manager of [Supermarket Name],'
coherence and cohesion
The letter lacks a clear structure and organization. It would benefit from better paragraphing and more coherent flow of ideas.
lexcial resource
The vocabulary and language used in the letter could be more formal and professional. Consider using more appropriate language for a formal complaint letter.
grammatical range
The grammatical errors and awkward phrasing make the letter challenging to read. Work on improving sentence structure and grammar.
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