You were recently disrespected by one of the employees at your local supermarket. Write a letter to the supermarket manager. In your letter • tell why you were speaking with the employee • describe the employee's rude behavior • explain what you'd like the manager to do

Hi, dear manager Well, Introducing myself, My full name is Jumayeva Sarvinoz. Writing about the process,
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am in shock, cause,
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have never seen before like
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terrible situation. Two days ago, With the intention of purchasing
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, I fought with
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employee. I uttered
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before: "
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washing- machine does not work well,
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will go back,
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of these
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get another. He agreed to the opinion, but, yesterday, after coming him, he said to me not to exchange
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product, Because,
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broke
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item. It is not good to cheat clients, he will not admit that
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he passed on the product which is used by someone. Depicting his
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worst
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, speaking with
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loud noise. He is
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the right to speak high. In short, dear manager, please
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will ask you
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polite
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the employee or exchange another one. I did not
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the
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. Please, give to be not drawbacks of the equipment me. I hope
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you will look through my position, and
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a fair decision
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. I am looking forward to
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your best option. Thank you beforehand. Sincerely, One othe your client: Sarvinoz

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coherence
Try to use clearer paragraphs, each focusing on one main idea to improve readability.
task achievement
Make sure to maintain a formal tone throughout the letter, as it is addressed to a manager.
task achievement
You effectively expressed your feelings and explained the situation clearly.
coherence
The letter includes a clear request towards the end, showing that you want a resolution.
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