You recently stayed at a hotel and were dissatisfied with the service you received. Write a letter to the hotel manager, explaining the situation and expressing your dissatisfaction. In your letter, you should: • Describe the problem and the details of your stay. • Explain how it affected your experience. • Suggest possible solutions or actions that you would like the manager to take. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service I received at your inn, where I stayed from 5th to 7th June during my visit to the city.
The problems started just after I checked in. I found out that there was no running water in the sink and immediately informed the management regarding the issue. I was consoled by saying that the maintenance worker is on his way and asked me to use water from the bucket they provided for the time being, however
no one showed up and I got the same answer despite multiple reporting. That was so frustrating, to say the least.
Add a comma
,however
Due to
a lack of water, my bathroom was stinking to the point that I couldn’t use it anymore. I didn’t get to bathe during my entire stay. I had to use a public bathroom near the hotel. My experience of the whole trip turned out to be bitter due to
this
. I wasn’t expecting such
a thing from a hotel of your reputation.
I would like to make a few suggestions. Firstly
, you could hire a full-time maintenance staff so that they are available all day. Secondly
, you better make sure that all the amenities are on order before renting out a room. I hope you look into the issue. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
RajSubmitted by sth.kumar2010 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite