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“The graph compares the percentage of international students and the percentage of UK learners gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK university.”

“The graph compares the percentage of international students and the percentage of UK learners gaining second class degrees or better at a major UK university.”
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The bar graph illustrates at what rate international and Britain pupils achieved second-class degrees or better at 7 varieties of field
UK
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 colleges during the year 2009. The results are really adequate for
both
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 international and local learners, in fact,
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 achieved a conclusion of a rate of above 50% in 6 majors other than international law.
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 groups became successful at the same rate in
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 nursing and accountancy with a percentage of almost over 75 and 60, respectively.
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 four-fifths of overseas
students
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 succeeded in electrical engineering, three-fifths of native speakers prospered in the same field. Global
students
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 reached the highest percentage with over 80% in the department of information technology
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 and surpassed
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students
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.
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, they were successful in similar proportions in Sociology, but native learners were ahead with a slight difference.
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 just over three-quarters of
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students
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 gained at least a second-class degree, the percentage was almost 70 for the others.
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, Britain scholars surpass overseas learners not only in art history but
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 in international law, with percentages of 80% and 70%, respectively.
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, the graph suggests that
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 and overseas
students
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 have distinct capabilities when studying at
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 Britain university.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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