The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate the different purposes of
water
use
in six regions of the world.
Overall
, Europe and North
America
mainly
use
water
for industry,
while
Central
Asia
, Africa, South East
Asia
and South
America
use
most of it for Agriculture. Europe uses the most
water
in industry (53%) among the six areas,
then
followed
North
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America
(48%.) In the two areas, the percentages of agricultural
use
are 32% and 39% respectively. In Central
Asia
, Africa, South East
Asia
and South
America
,
water
used for agriculture takes a great proportion, which is at least 71% in South
African
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and the greatest in Central
Asia
at 88%.
However
,
water
used for industry in them constitutes a small part, only about 5% to 12%, far
more
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less
that
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than
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in Europe and North
America
. As for
water
used at home, it is only around 7% to 15% in all the six areas except South
America
, which consumes 19% of it for domestic
use
, apparently higher than other regions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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