Some people think that renewable energy sources like solar and wind power should replace fossil fuels such as coal and gas as soon as possible. Others think we should continue to use fossil fuels while it is still cheap to do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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sources
like solar and wind power are taking place more and more in all chapters of our lives. Most developed Use synonyms
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try to figure out ways to increase these evolutionary methods, so as to prevent the environmental pollution that the whole world Correct your spelling
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causes
On the other hand
, the world economy will have the potential view, to be increased, as fossil fuels Linking Words
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as oil and gas are cheaper. In Linking Words
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essay, I will examine both points of view and be supporting my own opinion.
To start with, there are many studies, which give us the numerous beneficial aspects occurring to our sphere, by using renewable energy Linking Words
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, reach an end. Use synonyms
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, countries are trying to solve power and electricity problems by using solar and wind methods. On top of that, governments give low-interest loans to their communities to replace electricity with solar panels. Linking Words
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issue, is very helpful for the majority of families and industries, as the purchase of those solar methods is much more expensive than having electricity with fuels. Governments make solar power parks that give vitality to many industrial areas to reduce air pollution. With Linking Words
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change, we help our planet to recover from the climate disaster it Linking Words
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, our cars and public transportation use fuel. There are few electric, or solar cars, all over the world, and people continue to buy oil or petrol vehicles. Linking Words
For example
, communities make solar stations on central roads, to help people recharge their vehicles. Linking Words
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uses fossil fuels. So, by reducing the fuel in our cars, even if we all bought electric or solar automobiles, the need for the use of fuel will be reduced but not Linking Words
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To sum up
, renewable energy Linking Words
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are our future. Some decades back all these seem to be fiction stories for kids. Now is the only way we have to save our asteroid from climate problems, help our economy Use synonyms
raise
up, and in the end leave a better earth, a green globe for the next generations.Correct your spelling
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task response
Ensure that your essay clearly addresses the prompt and fully explores both sides of the argument. Provide a balanced analysis and clearly state your own opinion.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay has a clear structure with an introduction and conclusion. However, ensure that your main points are well-supported with evidence and examples throughout the essay.