The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates several steps of how the production of coffee is carried out before being sold.
It is clear that
there are 11 main stages in this
process, starting with beans being picked from the trees and ending with the resulting products being packed for sale.
As can be seen, during the first step, coffee beans are collected by farmers and let dry under the sun for a few days. Next,
those dried ones are roasted by heat in the oven before being cooled rapidly in a cooler. After cooling, a grinder machine is used to crush beans into powder.
Moreover
, once ground, the powder is mixed with hot water and then
the mixture is strained carefully. In the following stage, it is frozen in the freezer at a low temperature before being pulverized again. Subsequently
, the combination is dried in a vacuum in order to let all the left liquid evaporate. Finally
, the final products are packed into jars to get ready for sale in shops and supermarkets.Submitted by danphamngocha on
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