The line graph below shows the population size, birth and death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied data table describes the amount of
population
size, birth
and death
rates
on
England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. As a general trend, the Change preposition
in
population
size rate
increased overwhelmingly after the 19th century in England and Wales. Moreover
, the death
rates
declined after 1800 started Fix the agreement mistake
rate
while
the birth
rate
after 1950 went upward.
It could be noticed that the population
size rate
of England and Wales started approximately
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at approximately
million
in 1700, then
after 50 years the population
rate
went as high as 10 million
. During the next 50 years
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,years
population
rate
declined nearly
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to nearly
million
in 1800. Again after 50 years
it increased from nearly 3 Add a comma
,years
million
up to 10 million
in 1850. Furthermore
, that year the rate
rapidly increased almost
45 Change preposition
by almost
million
population
in 1900. However
, in the following centuries
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,centuries
rate
reached 50 million
in 2000.
The birth
rate
and the
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death
followed a similar trend from 1700 to 1950. In
1700 to 1750, an increase was seemed both these. The Change preposition
From
birth
rate
rose from 30 to 40 per 1000 people
while
the death
rate
increasing
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increased
people
. From 1750 to 1800 the rate
mode was steadiness both
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in both
of
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birth
and death
rates
. After which there was a heavy fall with both rates
reaching an all-time low of around 20 per thousand people
by 1950. from that year, the faltering begins which
the Correct word choice
and
birth
rate
climbs roughly 34 per 1000 people
in 2000, instead
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,instead
death
rates
were
plateau from 1950 to 2000.
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Overall
, population
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the population
rate
was
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the
started with the lowest number around 3 Correct article usage
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million
. It rocketed in three centuries, which
constituted 50 Correct pronoun usage
apply
million
in 2000 with a stabilized period between 1750 to 1850 at 10 million
. While
about
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birth
rate
and death
rate
they were almost the same, in the Add a comma
,rate
last
between 1950 to 2000 changes have
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