Gender imbalance has long been a general phenomenon not only in the labour market but also in formal education. Some analysts argue that it is impossible to eliminate the underrepresentation of women in some subjects in the university. Do you agree or disagree?

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inequality has existed long before and it still exists in the community one or the other way despite policy intervention in it. some commenter says that abandoning the social stigmatisation of

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bias would be difficult as it is

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observed in some of the universities around the world. I do agree with the statement as it is more commonly experienced in the community

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when girls usually

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to perform the assigned tasks.

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dominance by

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has overtaken the job markets, which is the leading cause of

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being treated inferior to

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. When the girls are forgotten in the job market, they will be left behind as

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housewife

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or some will be given low-paid jobs. In

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situation

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have to be dependent

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their

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at

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low self-esteem at

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too.

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if you are downlooked by more people in society, what could be the result? your performance will just stick at

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leaving behind all the skills you have obtained. That's why the girls lose their opportunity outdoors.

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there are ways and strategies to overcome

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mishaps in the society.

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revise the curriculum in the schools and colleges that are free from

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bias. Making a learning environment free from sexual

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for students will bring great change for upcoming youths.

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government should take responsibility for equity among

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and

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at the state level.

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offering

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equal job opportunities to both

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and

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, so that the

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raise their shoulders against the

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, gaining equal responsibility at

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too. In conclusion, with the existence of

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inequality since the early period, it will be challenging to overcome. Even

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, putting efforts from the policy level to self-awareness would minimise the prevalence of

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imbalance in society.