The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.) Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
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The supplied diagram illustrates the average time spent by unpaid workers per
week
and they are divided into two gender categories.
Overall
, it is obvious that married females do unpaid work
more than married males and while
women's trend considerably rises, men have a downward tendency.
As is presented in the diagram wedded females without children
have 30 hors
of Correct your spelling
hours
work
per week
, it
is less than other married women Correct pronoun usage
which
which
have Correct pronoun usage
who
children
. Meanwhile, Correct article usage
the male's
male's
trend goes Change noun form
male
on the contrary
to women's and men without any kid work
for free approximately
19 hours a Change preposition
for approximately
week
, however
, them having a
Correct the article-noun agreement
children
a child
children
reduces their work
hours. Furthermore
, female
which Add the comma(s)
,female
has
Correct subject-verb agreement
have
a
3+ Correct article usage
apply
children
works twice much time Change the noun form
child
than
that who has no Change preposition
as
children
as 60 hours per week
, comparatively to men with 3+ children
it is 3 times more.Submitted by amina07id on
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