The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas (1999 & 2004) Coffee UK Switzerland Denmark Belgium Sweden Bananas Switzerland UK Belgium Sweden Denmark 1999 (millions of euros) 1.5 3 1.8 1 0.8 1999 (millions of euros) 15 1 0.6 1.8 2 2004 (millions of euros) 20 6 2 1.7 1 2004 (millions of euros) 47 5.5 4 1 0.9

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee

and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas (1999 & 2004)

Coffee

UK

Switzerland

Denmark

Belgium

Sweden

Bananas

Switzerland

UK

Belgium

Sweden

Denmark

1999

(millions of euros)

1.5

3

1.8

1

0.8

1999

(millions of euros)

15

1

0.6

1.8

2

2004

(millions of euros)

20

6

2

1.7

1

2004

(millions of euros)

47

5.5

4

1

0.9
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