The pie charts give information about the proportoin males and females in employment in six categories divided into manualand non-manual occupations

The pie charts give information about the proportoin males and females in employment  in six  categories  divided into manualand non-manual occupations
‏The pie chart illustrates figures for men and women performing in six types of handwork and non-handwork occupations. ‏
Overall
, managerial and professional were have the Largest percentage in both,
while
the other manual has nearly the same shart in female and male.
In contrast
the general labourers it a small segment . ‏
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the proportion of females,clerical or related have the biggest fraction at 31
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In addition
, managerial and professional, and other manual represents 29% and 29% respectively.
while
the general and labourers, craft, and other non-manual collectively comprised less than a fifth. ‏
On the other hand
, the manual categories of males like a graft of similar and other manuals they have just a half in the graph. In terms of percentage ,managerial
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accounted for 36
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Finally
, the rest have almost 14 per cent.
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