In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that some nations encourage
companies
to transfer from urban to local
areas
by the government.
Although
there are some drawbacks, I would argue that there are more benefits.
However
,
on the other
hand
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the negative side of
this
development can not be overlooked and we should give enough thought
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well. Indeed relocating industries will have some positive impact but industries will have to cope with a number of various factors in less developed
areas
such
as security, lack of transportation, appropriate infrastructure to
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an industry and scarcity of communication
channel
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.
As a result
companies
and government would have to spend a good amount of money to
setup
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these means even before starting the business and
this
is what most
companies
would not come to terms with.
Besides
this
connectivity and client
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will
also
not be a piece of cake and can cause enough problems.
On the other hand
, there are more advantages
of
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moving
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industries and businesses outside of primary cities.
Firstly
, industrial plants always produce emissions, which do harm to individuals' physical health. We can see that some research institutes have proved that those
live
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close to the industrial zone within ten
kilometers
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have a much higher risk of getting
cancers
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.
Secondly
, workshop building takes up vast
areas
of land
while
its land use efficiency is extremely lower. Meanwhile, each square in the big cities
are
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as precious as gold.
Thus
, it is
economic
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for factories to set up new workshops in the remote area. It
also
benefits consumers
due to
the decline
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production
cost
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.
Lastly
,
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labor
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market in the regional
areas
will boost. More job opportunities will be given to the poor
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in the rural thereby improving their living standards. In conclusion, it seems to me that the benefits of relocating huge industrial
companies
in regional zones
such
as more available job opportunities, reduce
labor
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costs and locations
to
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businesses, and minimizes pollution in the atmosphere do outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regional areas
  • big cities
  • encouraging
  • industries
  • businesses
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • economic growth
  • overcrowding
  • traffic congestion
  • employment opportunities
  • balanced regional development
  • preservation of natural resources
  • quality of life
  • cultural diversity
  • lack of infrastructure
  • amenities
  • skilled workers
  • impact on the environment
  • decline in the economy
  • social and cultural challenges
  • integrating
  • new industries
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