The line chart shows fish and meat consumption in Europe from 1979 to 2004
The
consumption
of Non-Veg in Europe from1979
to 2004 has been illustrated with the help of a line graph. Correct your spelling
from 1979
Overall
, it can be seen that the consumption
of chicken has surpassed Beef
and Lamb
over the 25-year period. On the contrary
, people eating Beef
and Lamb
has
dropped Unnecessary verb
apply
since
1979 to 2004. Change preposition
from
However
, the consumption
of seafood has remained constant without much
fluctuations throughout the quarter.
Correct quantifier usage
many
Initially
, the consumption
of beef
was the highest being consumed more than 200 grams per person per week and has gone through some instability until 1984. Soon after, in 1984 a small rise followed by a sudden dip between 1984 and 1989 is observed which has
continued to drop until 2004. Unnecessary verb
apply
Along side
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Alongside
Beef
, eating of
Change preposition
apply
Lamb
has followed a similar trendstarting
from 150 grams per person per week.
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trend starting
However
, the
Chicken has gained Correct article usage
apply
its
popularity and experienced a gradual-varying rise, crossing Correct pronoun usage
apply
Lamb
and Beef
, reaching its higest
just a little before 2004 Correct your spelling
highest
of
Change preposition
at
250-grams
per person per week. Correct your spelling
250 grams
Conversly
, Seafood like Correct your spelling
Conversely
the
fish is not very famous and Correct article usage
apply
infact
its ingestion Correct your spelling
in fact
has
dropped Unnecessary verb
apply
intially
and remained constant with minor fluctuations until 2004.Correct your spelling
initially
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