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eating too much sugar is harmful for our health.some people think that it is government responsibility ti limit people's sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. discuss both views and give your opinion

#sugar #health #people #government #responsibility #ti #limit #consumption #amount
Sugar
 limitation In contemporary life,
sugar
have
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 made certain doubts. Many scientists approved that
sugar
 has drawbacks
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others
saying
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 that
sugar
 improved
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human activity and mood.
However
, even though there are individuals who agree that
sugar
 should be limited by the
governments
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government
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, I believe that
people
 should control
there
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their
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 own
consumes
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consumption
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 of
sugar
. In
this
essay
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 I will discuss both points of view with examples and
evidences
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evidence
pieces of evidence
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.
Sugar
have
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 shown
there
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their
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 efficiency
on
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 supplying the human body with energy. To illustrate,
sugar
is considers
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is considered
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as
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a
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carbohydrates
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 which
the
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 mean source of energy in our bodies.
For instance
, when someone eats more
sweetness
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 food, he feels more energized during the day. In that case,
sugar
 is
an
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essential by the time you feel lazy.
Furthermore
,
As
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 the significant increase
at
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in
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 dopamine levels that
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sugar
 makes
to
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the
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people
, happiness in
human
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the human
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 mind increases.
For example
,
people
 who are suffering from
mode
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mood
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 disorders,
they
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eat more
sugar
 to feel free from
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illness, so
sugar
 can make
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people
feeling
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feel
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 better. Contrary to what I believe, many
people
 agree that
sugar
amount
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amounts
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 should be managed by the governments.
According to
 their arguments,
sugar
have
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has
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 uncountable drawbacks to the body. Starting with obesity which
have
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has
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 been a serious disease that
damaging
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the
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human organs.
Additionally
,
sugar
maight
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might
 be addicted
by
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kids who
does
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do
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 not well-informed about the
sugar
 dangers.
However
, even though
that
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their
fiars
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fears
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 are correct, the government can not control each
indiviually
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individual
behavior
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behaviour
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.
To conclude
,
sugar
 has many negative
effect
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effects
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to
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on
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people
, but the person
have
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has
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 to set his own diet plan.
Government
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 will not access each
person
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person's
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 house and choose to them what to eat. Affording a nutritionist to
who
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those who
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 need is their part of
responsibility
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the responsibility
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.
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