The graph below shows in proportion trends the changing patterns of domestic acces to modern technology in homes in the UK.
The graph below shows in proportion trends the changing patterns of domestic
acces
to modern technology in homes in the UK. We met a CD player, Mobile phone, Home computer and Internet Correct your spelling
access
acces
in Correct your spelling
access
this
diagram between 1996/97 and 2002/03 periods. Firstly
, the CD player initiated
Add a missing verb
was initiated
at
1996/97 terms and gradually increased. The Change preposition
in
percentages
of Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
this
option is 60%-80%. The top of the highest point is 82%. Afterward
we indicated Home computer. It commenced at the same time with Add a comma
,Afterward
Mobile
phone and CD player. Home Correct article usage
a Mobile
computer
increased progressively in the middle of 22%-57%. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
Furthermore
, Mobile phone uses fluctuated wildly, but the trend was upward. By contrast
, other patterns had same
starting term. Correct article usage
the same
However
, there was
Internet Change the verb form
were
acces
from 1998/99 intervals. Correct your spelling
access
This
pattern was rapidly develop
compared to others. About 7%-42%Wrong verb form
developed
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