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The graph below shows in proportion trends the changing patterns of domestic acces to modern technology in homes in the UK.

The graph below shows in proportion trends the changing patterns of domestic acces to modern technology in homes in the UK.
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The graph below shows in proportion trends the changing patterns of domestic
acces
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access
 to modern technology in homes in the UK. We met a CD player, Mobile phone, Home computer and Internet
acces
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access
 in
this
 diagram between 1996/97 and 2002/03 periods.
Firstly
, the CD player
initiated
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at
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in
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 1996/97 terms and gradually increased. The
percentages
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 of
this
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Afterward
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 we indicated Home computer. It commenced at the same time with
Mobile
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a Mobile
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 phone and CD player. Home
computer
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computers
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 increased progressively in the middle of 22%-57%.
Furthermore
, Mobile phone uses fluctuated wildly, but the trend was upward.
By contrast
, other patterns had
same
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 starting term.
However
, there
was
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 Internet
acces
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access
 from 1998/99 intervals.
This
 pattern was rapidly
develop
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 compared to others. About 7%-42%
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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