The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in UK in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in UK in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart outlines the percentages of poor family
types
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in the United Kingdom in 2002. Generally speaking, 14%
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households were insolvent in 2002 and half of those poor families were sole parents and singles without any child. As can be seen, 26%
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parents in the United Kingdom were economically insolvent in 2002 and
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was the highest ratio for the poor British family
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.
Poverty
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was prevalent among the singles without children as 24% of them were under the
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line. These two
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of households accounted for half of the total
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-stricken families in the UK in 2002. Couples with children had
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poverty
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rate than couples without children.
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the 15%
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of former
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family
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witnessed economic misfortune, the latter accounted for 9% of
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households. It is worth noticing that ages British had fewer
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rates than their younger counterparts. One in twenty aged couples had to go through financial hardships
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it was 7% for the single aged person.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words types, poverty with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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