Methods of transporation for people travelling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK. The two pie charts compare five categories of UK travelling percentage of university (train, bicycle, bus, walking, car,) from 2004 to 2009) Units are measured in proportion.
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The pie chart
show
the Change the verb form
shows
datas
of Correct your spelling
data
variety
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a variety
kind
of transportation for Change preposition
of kind
people
travelling to one college for either work or study in 2 different years, 200 and 2009 in British.
Overall
, it is noticeable that trains, one of the transportation have been used the least while
car or bus took the most transport being used by peoples.
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2004, the figure gives information that Change preposition
apply
car
have been the Fix the agreement mistake
cars
methods
of transportation that Fix the agreement mistake
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people
commonly used, accounting for 51%, more than half of the pie chart. Followed by bus with lower than the previous transport 18%. Bicycle
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The bicycle
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being
used with just 9%, Unnecessary verb
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people
who prefer walked
to Change the verb form
to walk
office
or work and Add an article
the office
an office
people
who used train
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the train
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approximately each Wrong verb form
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others
, withChange to a singular noun
other
1
% difference, 4% and 3% each.
5 years later, Correct article usage
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2009
. The percentages for each have fluctuated. The most used vehicle Change preposition
in 2009
belong
to Correct subject-verb agreement
belongs
bus
, it took 46%, an rapidly increased. Next was Add an article
the bus
a bus
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a car
the car
car
with 28%, Fix the agreement mistake
cars
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bicycle
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bicycles
the
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6
% difference from the year 2004. The walking method and Correct article usage
a 6
train
still approximately with 6% and 4%, they have increased, but not a big jumpWrong verb form
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