You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leavingexplain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will costask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I'm planning to spend a weekend near the seaside with my family. As I experienced your services

last

year for a business meeting so I would like to approach you again.

Furthermore

, we will arrive on Friday evening at about 6 pm and leave on Monday early morning. I want to book 2 double rooms for two days in advance so that I will not face inconvenience and kindly tell me your latest revised per night charges and information regarding what kind of facilities you provide like a spa, indoor or outdoor swimming pool etc Would it be possible for you to send information about

this

place as much as you can?? Because

along with

the seaside view, my family would love to shop there and try some traditional food at restaurants and we

also

want to visit some beautiful places that present the beauty of nature

as well as

historic places. Looking forward to a positive response from your side. Yours faithfully, Ali

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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