your English speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for you advice about learning a new sport Write an email your friend recommend in new sport would be for you friend to learn Explain how your friend could learn this sport Suggest that you both learn this sport togeter

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My dear
friends
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shoy
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After a long time, I will write
you
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. how are you and your family? I am glad to give you advice about sport. My home near has a
sports
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club
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it is very popular. I recommend that
sports
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club
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to you. It is a green land
sports
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club
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. It is a very popular international
club
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. I would like to recommend to you basketball.
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club
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gives you more opportunities for
sports
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cloth and whatever you want you can buy everything at
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club
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.
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, if you buy two things in clbe you can ask for it
risiption
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reception
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and there are very cheap everything. I would like to say that I joined
this
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club
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one year ago.
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, I played basketball. If you join the
club
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we can play together. And
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basketball playing one week a three
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.
you
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can easy to go with me. I hope you have enough of
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advice. I am stopping now god
blss
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bless
you. your lovely friend,
Manusha
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Manisha
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