Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, describe the position you applied for why you think the interview went well why you need the result of the interview

Hello Sir/mam, I am writing
this
letter to get enquire about my
interview
that was conducted
last
week with the interviewer Mr Mark. I applied for assistant manager for the company and I received an invitation for an
interview
from the HR department of the company. My
interview
was gone well, they gave me a good response about my profile.
Moreover
, I attended their 3 assignment
at the end
of the
interview
where the results were shown at the same time I got 100% from each of them and I got happily congrats from the HR manager for my performance.
Therefore
, I was waiting for my
interview
update for the
last
2 weeks. Could you please let me know the result of their final decision?
However
, I have to reply to another job offer to get for my performance. I am truly interested to work with
this
company as it is the closest and most affordable for me. Sincerely, Thanks. Preet.
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