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The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper from 1980 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper from 1980 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The line graph shows the amounts of
pulp
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,
timber
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, and paper in a European country from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
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, the figures for paper and
pulp
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 saw substantial increases,
while
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 the amount of
timber
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 declined steadily over the same period. In 1980,
pulp
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production
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 stood at nearly 6
million
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tonnes
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, which was the highest amount,
while
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timber
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 stayed at the lowest point (4
million
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tonnes
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). Over the next five years, the figure for
pulp
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 declined dramatically before it climbed from 7
million
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tonnes
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 to 10
million
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tonnes
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 by the end of the period. Paper
production
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 rose steadily until a slight fall in 1995, and
then
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 increased rapidly, peaking at 12
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000.
Timber
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production
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 started at 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980 and increased rapidly to 10
million
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tonnes
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 in 1985. Over the next 15 years, the
production
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 figure experienced a gradual decrease and reached nearly 8
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pulp, timber, production, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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