The graph below shows average carbon dioxide(CO2) emission per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden , Italy and portugal between 1967 and 2007 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main featire and make comparisions where relevant

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The provided line chart illustrates the amount of emitted carbon dioxide per citizen from the four European countries over five decades.

Overall

, it is evident from the chart that the United Kingdom experienced constantly the highest carbon dioxide

emission

,.indicating that British citizens consumed energy excessively and avoided conservation methods. As can be seen, the highest Co2

emission

recorded for the United Kingdom started roughly at 11

tonnes

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and remained slightly stable at the peaked point over that period to finish with well over 8

tonnes

. The lowest

emission

registered for Portugal and barely under 2

tonnes

However

, it witnessed a regular climb to meet with

Sweden

in 2007 and both ended with nearly under 6 citizens. Despite

this

junction representing the highest point for Portugal, it was

also

the lowest

emission

for

Sweden

In addition

Sweden

and Italy began with a sharp growth and stood at 1977. In spite of Italy emitting lower carbon dioxide than

Sweden

, Italy overtook

Sweden

's emissions in 1987,

conversely

, displayed

higher

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point than

Sweden

in 2007 and stood at just under 8

tonnes

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