the chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

the chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
The bar chart demonstrates the proportion of male and female
teachers
in six divided types of educational background in the UK in 2010. In Nursery/Pre-
school
, a large percentage of
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were female, with approximately 97%, and 3% of
teachers
were men. The account of female
teachers
was more than 30 times that of male
teachers
. In Primary
school
, male
teachers
only accounted for 8%, and female
teachers
still took a big proportion, with 92%. But in
University
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, the
number
of male
teachers
was
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clearly exceeded
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the
number
of female
teachers
. 70% of the
teachers
there were men, and female
teachers
were only 30%. At the same time, there was not a big difference between the
number
of male
teachers
and female
teachers
in Secondary
school
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schools
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,
College
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, and Private training
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. The proportion of female
teachers
was 3% more than male
teachers
in Secondary
school
,
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with 53
%. And in
Private
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training
school
, the situation was exactly the opposite of
Secondary
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school
. College almost had the same account of male
teachers
and female
teachers
, with 50%. In conclusion, the
number
of male teacher and female
teachers
were unbalanced, and Nursery/
Pre-
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school
, Primary
achool
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school
and Secondary
school
had more female
teachers
, and Private training
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institute
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and University had more male
teachers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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