The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20

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bar graph shows the consumption of

computer

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computers

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ownership

during 2002 to 2010 and the level of education from 2002 to 2010 the displayed

source

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sources

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of No high

school

diploma, High

school

graduate, College, Bachelor’s degree and Postgraduate qualification. The graph

revels

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reveals

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the following Important facts.

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the

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overall

of

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computer

ownership

was sharply

increase

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increased

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from 2002 to 2010.

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,

the

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computer

ownership

by education level

also

rise

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during

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from

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2002 to 2010.

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,

in

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2002,

the

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computer

ownership

, there

were climb

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from 55

percentage

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per cent

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in 2002 to 75

percentage

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in 2010. There

were

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dramatically

increase

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over

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of over

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25

percentage

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. In

term

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of

computer

ownership

by education level. In 2002, there were over 15 % from No high

school

diploma and 35% from high

school

graduate

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graduates

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less than but in 2010, has

increase

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to 35% and 60%.

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, the college, Bachelor’s degree and postgraduate qualification

were grow

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were grown

were growing

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from 55%, 65% and 75% in 2002 to over 75% which postgraduate qualification was higher In 90 % in 2010.