The pie charts below show the comparison different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The pie charts below show the comparison different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
The diagram compares several types of
energy
production in France in 1995 and
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
2005. There are coal, nuclear,
gas
,
petro
Correct your spelling
petrol
and other kinds. The two charts reveal that
gas
stood in the greatest proportion in both 1995 and 2005.
Although
other kinds of
energy
production bore the least parts, the expansion was raised from 4.9% to 9.1%. The production of coal ,
gas
and nuclear slightly increased in 2005. Coal
energy
grew from 29.8% to 30.93%.
Gas
energy
rose from 29.63% to 30.31%. Nuclear power expanded from 6.4% to 10.1%.
On the other hand
,
petro
Change the capitalization
Petro
show examples
had an obvious reduction from 29.27% to 19.55%. We can tell from the pie charts that
gas
played an important role
due to
the high and rising proportion.
However
, the decrease
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
petro not only indicated that it was less productive but
also
showed that the use of the rest categories enhanced in a decade.
Submitted by s99104032 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: