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The tables below give information abou sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information abou sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tabloid presents the details about sales of
Fairtrade- labelled
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Fairtrade-labelled
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 food items (
coffee
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 and banana) in 1999 and 2004 namely in
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UK
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the UK
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, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and
Sweden
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.
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, Switzerland sold 3
million
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euros
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 worth of
coffee
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 in 1999.
Meanwhile
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 in 2004,
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UK
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the UK
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 sold 20
million
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euros
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 worth of
coffee
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 and 15
million
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euros
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 worth
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bananas
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of bananas
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 in 1999, making it the highest grosser of the year for the particular category.
Moreover
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,
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UK
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the UK
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 sells the most in 2004. The lowest sale of
coffe
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coffee
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the
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apply
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2004 was made by
Sweden
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 at 1
million
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euros
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 which is 0.2 more
million
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euros
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 sold than in the year 1999. For
bananas
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, Denmark and
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sweden
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Sweden
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 have the lowest sales, respectively.
Bananas
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 have a higher gross rate than
coffee
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 with a difference of a whopping 27
million
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euros
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.
Nevertheless
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,
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UK
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the UK
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 is on top
on
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of
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 both lists. Other countries improve a little, the
seconf
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second
 highest, Switzerland increasing its sales by 3
million
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euros
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 than in 1999 for
coffee
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. For
bananas
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, most countries are improving but Belgium and
Sweden
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 are 0.8 and 1.1
million
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euroes
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euros
 less than in 1999.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, uk, sweden, million, euros, bananas with synonyms.
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