Task 10 The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task 10 The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during

 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph displays how much export earnings of certain categories of exports have changed
while
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the table provides data on proportional changes in value that happened to those categories in export between the years of 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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, Engineered goods and Petroleum
products
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were the highest earners in both periods compared to the other categories
whereas
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, Textile was the biggest growing category in value but Gems and Jewellery were the only ones to fall drastically in 2016. Export has seen a gradual appreciation in earnings in the year 2016. In 2015, the two major exported
products
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were Petroleum
products
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and Engineered goods which were approximately more than 55%.
However
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, in 2016 both exports were above 60%.
Furthermore
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, Agricultural
products
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and Textiles were the least earners at around 35%
Nonetheless
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, there was an increment in earnings in the year 2016. Despite
this
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, there were Gems and Jewellery which depleted in numbers
at the end
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of the period. The values of these
products
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were changed if compared to both years. Textiles showed a rapid surge which was about almost 16%.
Moreover
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, only Engineered goods increased to 5%
whereas
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the Petroleum
products
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and Agricultural
products
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only rose to less than 3%.
Although
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there are Gems and jewellery which shrank in the year 2016 by more than 5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export value
  • economic sector
  • percentage change
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • trend analysis
  • year-on-year comparison
  • significant growth/decline
  • stagnation
  • market dynamics
  • fiscal repercussions
  • trade balance
  • competitive advantage
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