the graph below shows the percentage of part _time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010.
The provided bar chart presents the proportion of employees who do part-time work in several countries in the United Kingdom between two specific years.
Overall
, it can be seen that residents in Wales preferred working part-time jobs to other countries in both years. On the other hand
, Northern Ireland did not prefer this
kind of job controversially.
To start with, In 1980, dwellers in Wales accounted for approximately 32% which was triple that Northern Ireland people recorded. In addition
, Wales recorded slightly increased upto 35% after three decades. Furthermore
, moving on to England which recorded the second largest group in this
survey, citizens in England also
rose steadily to 6% which was about 25% in 1980.
To be elaborated further
, although
Scotland was only about 10% in 1980, they sharply grew up to almost double after that. On the flip side, there was a noticeable result in Northern Ireland, they
plummeted by approximately 3% in 2010.Correct pronoun usage
which
Submitted by kigj95 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼