Your company holds a staff party every every in the same hotel. This time you are tasked to organize the party and you have to write a letter to the hotel's manager. Include the following in your letter. - Write about your past experience with the hotel - What are your impressions with the hotel's service? - What you want to ask the manager

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you in good health and high spirits. In the past , a time I have found to stay opportunity in your resort.

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, I was too much pleasure in

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hotel. I am writing

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letter to inform you that once again my company is planning to organise a party in your lodging. Every year we celebrate the company's staff celebration at your place and as an employer has left too happy in your lodging.

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, your hotel is full of all modern amenities and the party room is very huge and attractive.

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, I decided to celebrate the function once again in the same place. resort's service is perfect and all the staff members are too much helpful and kind full. They are doing their best in a positive way.

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; my colleague can enjoy themselves properly and it makes your place unique. It would be really appreciated, if you manage the time for the meeting, so we can meet and finalize the price, date and menu for the party. My call phone number is 6737627. Could you contact me directly? Hoping to hear from you soon! Warmest regards,

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

204 words

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