The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word
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The charts provide information on the residency of people who were born in Australia and overseas in three different spaces over a fifteen-year period.
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, the majority of people from both groups lived in the cities from 1995 to 2010. Looking at the graph, in 1995, we can see that the results were very similar as the two groups mostly chose to live in the city, with 60% of immigrants and around 50% of Australian born. Interestingly, in the same year, both groups
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preferred to reside in rural towns, with 40% of overseas residents and about 30% of the citizens.
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, even though towns were the least favourite place to reside, we can see more Australians than their counterpart, with 20% and around 10%, respectively.
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, in 2010, it showed significant gaps between city residents from the other areas in those two categories.
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, 80% of foreigners and approximately 65% of locals chose to settle in cities. Meanwhile, only approximately 5-10% of foreigners preferred to reside in other areas. Notably, there was the same number of people who wanted to settle in towns and rural, at about 15%.
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