The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*
Illustrated in the given bar graph is the proportion of the
number
of students
according to
their gender, studying six subjects
in the fields related to art at a UK university as of 2011.
A few notable features can be spotted right away in the illustration. Among them the overall
number
of female students
being
noticeably bigger than the Wrong verb form
is
number
of male students
. Almost every subject was studied more by female students
. However
, there is an exception from the general pattern.
Starting off with the most obvious feature that
is the prevailing Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
of female students
studying the given subjects
. Exactly the
half of the Correct article usage
apply
subjects
in the chart were being studied by over 200 females, while
only 2 subjects
from the list barely managed to reach the same number
of male students
. The difference seems to peak in the philosophy, as the number
of female students
learning it is exactly 3 times more than that of the male students
. Every subject except Art and Design was studied more by female students
. The aforementioned subject seems to be the only exception in the graph, as the number
of male students
in it prevailed at the time.Submitted by tukezaliyeva96 on
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