The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*
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Illustrated in the given bar graph is the proportion of the
number
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of
students
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according to
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their gender, studying six
subjects
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in the fields related to art at a UK university as of 2011. A few notable features can be spotted right away in the illustration. Among them the
overall
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number
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of female
students
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being
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noticeably bigger than the
number
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of male
students
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. Almost every subject was studied more by female
students
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.
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, there is an exception from the general pattern. Starting off with the most obvious feature
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that
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is the prevailing
number
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of female
students
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studying the given
subjects
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. Exactly
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half of the
subjects
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in the chart were being studied by over 200 females,
while
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only 2
subjects
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from the list barely managed to reach the same
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of male
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. The difference seems to peak in the philosophy, as the
number
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of female
students
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learning it is exactly 3 times more than that of the male
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. Every subject except Art and Design was studied more by female
students
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. The aforementioned subject seems to be the only exception in the graph, as the
number
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of male
students
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in it prevailed at the time.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, subjects with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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