The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.*
Illustrated in the given bar graph is the proportion of the
number
of
students
according to
their gender, studying six
subjects
in the fields related to art at a UK university as of 2011. A few notable features can be spotted right away in the illustration. Among them the
overall
number
of female
students
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noticeably bigger than the
number
of male
students
. Almost every subject was studied more by female
students
.
However
, there is an exception from the general pattern. Starting off with the most obvious feature
that
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is the prevailing
number
of female
students
studying the given
subjects
. Exactly
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half of the
subjects
in the chart were being studied by over 200 females,
while
only 2
subjects
from the list barely managed to reach the same
number
of male
students
. The difference seems to peak in the philosophy, as the
number
of female
students
learning it is exactly 3 times more than that of the male
students
. Every subject except Art and Design was studied more by female
students
. The aforementioned subject seems to be the only exception in the graph, as the
number
of male
students
in it prevailed at the time.
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