You nearly complete your trial work period of two months and desire to become an official employee in the company. Write an email to your manager: Saying why you deserve to pass the trial work period Explaining what benefits you are able to bring for the company if passed Explaining what skills you should improve Stating your long-term career goals if your have an opportunity to work in the company Try to write a minimum of 50 words.

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my trial work period. It

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incredible experience working. I write to you today to express my desire to become an official employee

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our fantastic company. Throughout the trial period,

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have strived to demonstrate my commitment and dedication to my role. I have completed all the tasks and projects assigned to me, consistently meeting deadlines and delivering quality work. With each working day,

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have to learn and grow, proactively seeking feedback from colleagues. I believe that my passion for my work

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makes me a valuable asset to the team.

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need to improve. It's a communication between me and the team members because

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not good at communication. I kindly request your

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consideration in granting me the opportunity to become an official employee. I am confident that

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candidate for

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role. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to discussing

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at your convenience. Warm regards, Do Hong Hai Nam