You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The pie charts depict the amount of electricity generated in

Germany

and

France

from all

sources

including

renewables

in the year 2009. Units are measured in kWh.

Overall

it is clear that

Germany

produced more

energy

than

France

during the given year.

While

Germany

, most of the

energy

was produced from conventional thermal

sources

, in

France

, it was produced from nuclear.

Germany

relied more on

renewables

as opposed to

France

. In

Germany

, more than half of the total

energy

(59.6%) was produced from conventional thermal

sources

while

almost a quarter was from nuclear

sources

23%.

Renewables

account for 17.4% of the total production and much of it was produced from biomass and wind 39.3% and 36.6%.

Energy

from hydroelectric and solar is 17.7% and 6.1% of renewable

energy

respectively. In

France

, more than half of the

energy

generated comes from nuclear 76% and about a quarter from conventional and

renewables

While

renewable

energy

was generated, 80.5% came from hydroelectric. wind and biomass shared about 10.5% and 9.1% respectively.

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